Wednesday, April 11, 2012

work in progress / Alice Anne

 


     The one on the left is finished I think. I worked on it some more and it has another layer of writing on drafter's vellum. I would like to give this a shiny finish, reminiscent of Japanese lacquer. What do you think? I was thinking of gloss acrylic varnish.
     The one on the right is an attempt to capture a heavy, windy snow storm in the woods. I wanted the paint and the shapes to do all the work by themselves, without subtleties to look real. But I think I may have ended up with an uneasy mixture of adherence to the medium (the "branches" are the cutouts from the negative shapes – with white behind – in the background) and realism. Maybe I can rescue it somehow?
Alice Anne

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Anonymous AO said...

The diagonal emphasis in each one is interesting and unexpected. You might consider adding a tiny bit of text, with an emphasis on the diagonal limbs, to the green one on the right... it could use a little more black, as well as a stronger contextual bridge with the one on the left. I would wait on the shiny varnish... it would likely diffuse the lovely texture you have in the piece.. you can always add it later if you wish.

April 17, 2012 at 8:29 PM  

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